Tag Archive: Fiction


Novel #2 Progress: Crunch Time!

As the end of  March approaches, I feel the pressure of a self-imposed deadline. I promised myself I would finish revisions on Novel #2 by March 31st, which means I will be working like a maniac in the coming week to finish what I started.

Word Count Progress:

Draft #1 Word Count:

  • Start Word Count: 63,373
  • End Word Count: 67,994
  • Total: 4,621

Draft #2 Revised Word Count:

  • Start Word Count: 65,883
  • End Word Count: 70,551
  • Total: 4,668

Writing Process Notes:

  • I am officially two chapters away from completing revisions! As planned, I reached 90% completion last week, which puts me in a great position to finish the second draft during Spring Break.
  • Thanks so much to everyone that contributed to last week’s discussion concerning the use of epilogues. So many great points were made and they are all helping me decide what to do. I am still pondering whether or not to include the epilogue I’ve written, though I am leaning towards keeping it in place. I like how it opens up a new story line and I think it will make readers really excited for the sequel.

Novel Tidbit:

 The Light Side:

One of the first promises I made during this journey was that Ian would not be a vampire or a werwolf. There are a number of reasons why I avoided this trend, (i.e. it’s overdone and the market is flooded), but at the core of my decision is my desire to prove something I profoundly believe. A good urban fantasy/paranormal story doesn’t necessarily need an element of dark evil to hold a reader’s interest.

As a reader, I’ve grown a bit tired of damsels in distress falling in love with dangerous boys. Not that I don’t love a good bad boy story, but it doesn’t hurt to try something a little different without losing the tension created by the conflict between good and evil. The vampire thing was fun (Twilight) and so are devil fighters (Mortal Instruments and Infernal Devices), but my muse and I want to see if there’s another way to give a fresh spin to the mortal vs. supernatural world. The trick is making sure the conflict is still there and the stakes remain high.

While Ian’s true identity is shrouded in mystery, I can assure you he is not anything remotely sinister. The entities in his world also are not evil or blackhearted. In fact, the so-called villains in my novel would actually be considered the good guys just about anywhere else.

So, how do I create conflict with characters who are technically on the same side? Easy. I added an element of danger beyond everyone’s control. Ian’s world is held together by ancient creeds and traditions that are considered unbreakable. Even those with a heart of gold are bound to carry out the rules and the punishments associated with iron clad edicts. Throw in a life and death situation for those involved, along with a mystical feud and you’ve got a heck of hook for a story.

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c.b.w. 2013

Book Review: Beautiful Creatures

Beautiful Creatures (Caster Chronicles, #1)Beautiful Creatures by Kami Garcia

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Ethan Wate is stuck in a small South Carolina town, where nothing ever happens. While everyone around him seems to thrive on living a mundane life, Ethan dreams of getting out of Gatlin and experiencing more than Civil War reenactments, bake sales, and cotillions.

The first time Ethan lays eyes on Lena Duchannes, he knows everything in his boring world is about to change. Not only is she beautiful, but she is different from all the other girls in town. For a guy who’s had it with normalcy, Lena is the girl of his dreams in more ways than one.

Lena is an instant outcast with her funky wardrobe and her family ties to Gatlin’s resident hermit. Ethan is basically committing social suicide by choosing to hang out with her, but he is hopelessly attracted to the mystery that is Lena. His infatuation soon turns to love and lucky for him the feeling is mutual.

However, it isn’t long before Ethan learns the truth about Lena. There is a reason why she writes numbers on her hands and why it always seems to rain when she is upset. Lena is a Caster (a.k.a. witch) who is inching closer to her 16th birthday. Upon hitting this milestone, she will be Claimed for dark magic instead of light thanks to a longstanding family curse.

Lena’s fear of turning dark incites Ethan’s quest to find a way to release her from the curse. It turns out Gatlin is full of secrets both mortal and supernatural. At the center of it all, is an ordinary boy with more power than he realizes.

Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl’s epic tale is a bit long, but where it lacks in editing, it excels in originality. In a market flooded with paranormal romance, it’s becoming increasingly difficult to find YA fiction with unique characters and story lines. Beautiful Creatures breaks the mold by letting the story unfold through Ethan’s point of view. The male perspective puts a new spin on an old formula and it is so refreshing! Garcia and Stohl also deserve props for realistically portraying small-town life in the South. In particular, their references to various modes of prejudice are a sobering reminder that the past repeats itself more frequently than we like to admit.

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c.b.w. 2013

Book Review: The Odd Sea

The Odd SeaThe Odd Sea by Frederick Reiken

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

When sixteen-year-old Ethan Shumway walks down the driveway towards Baker’s Bottom Pond, no one in his family could have known it would be the last time they’d ever see him. Both tragic and resilient, The Odd Sea follows the story of a family coping with the sudden loss of a son and brother.

Ethan’s younger brother Philip watches helplessly as his mother descends into manic depression and his father throws himself into manual labor as a means to deal with his grief. Meanwhile, Philip’s sisters deal with loss in polar opposite ways. The eldest relies on anger and avoidance, while the younger latches onto Philip.

Philip’s naïve hope of finding his brother plays out as he spends his free time searching the woods and Ethan’s favorite places. He hangs out with Ethan’s girlfriend and reads his diary for any clues that might lead to where his brother is hiding. As Philip gets older, his search changes shape as he realizes the possibility that Ethan could be dead. He never truly accepts that reality, but he learns there is a delicate balance between hope and the truth.

The emotional journey of loss deepens with each passing year as the hole of Ethan’s absence never really closes. While Philip and his family find different ways of living with their grief, all find comfort in the love they have for each other.

Frederick Reiken explores the impact of a missing person with so much intensity, Ethan’s disappearance becomes a personal experience. He makes solid choices in imagery that beautifully reflect the emotional conflict between grief, frustration, and guilt from needing to move forward. Subtle and simplistic, Reiken’s writing allows a highly charged story to flow naturally without turning into something melodramatic and unbelievable. This careful sense of storytelling is what makes an unconventional ending work in such a beautiful and realistic way.

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c.b.w. 2013

Novel #2 Progress: Conflict!

It was another great week for Novel #2. Once again, I was immersed in scenes that rank among my favorites in the story, so my already super-charged motivation received additional jolts when my writing time rolled around each day.

Word Count Progress:

Draft #1 Word Count:

  • Start Word Count: 52,576
  • End Word Count: 55,440
  • Total: 2,864

Draft #2 Revised Word Count:

  • Start Word Count: 54,012
  • End Word Count: 57,074
  • Total: 3,062

Writing Process Notes:

  • This week I began reading Sever by Lauren DeStefano for two reasons: 1) I love the Chemical Garden Trilogy. It’s one of the most original and well-written YA series out there. 2) It’s written in first person, present tense. While I’m enjoying the story, I’m taking notes on the overall structure of the novel. I’m looking at this as an amazing learning tool to help me with my own work on Novel #2. I see places where I’m implementing point of view and tense correctly, but I’m also starting to see where I need to make some adjustments.

Novel Tidbit:

Conflict:

  • They say the core of every good story is conflict and that is particularly true for YA. However, for my novel I wanted to make sure the conflict I created would showcase the importance of self-reliance and selfless sacrifice for those we love.
  • Through trial and error, I discovered how important it is to make sure conflict comes from a place of truth or it will not seem authentic to readers. Even though, my novel is rooted in urban fantasy, human beings are at the core, so that’s where I had to dig to find the origins of internal and external conflict.
  • There are several layers of conflict built into Novel #2, but here are a few examples of friction in terms of characters and plot:
    • Amanda and Ian: They are a couple, but like all couples they don’t agree on everything. Ian often underestimates Amanda, (not because he thinks she is weak, but due to what he is in comparison to her mortal status), and that infuriates her! On the other hand, Amanda constantly tests Ian’s boundaries, which causes him to question the promises he’s made in the past. In addition, these two argue frequently over the concepts of free will and fate.
    • Amanda on the inside: Amanda is constantly at war with herself as she oscillates between her duty to her mother and what she wants for herself. Her fierce loyalty to family keeps her trapped in an impossible situation, while her longing for something better keeps her optimism alive.
    • Ian on the inside: Everything about Ian is a contradiction. He is locked into a particular path thanks to his true identity, but he secretly dreams of a different existence. His love for Amanda coupled with his secret could lead to his demise – a reality that haunts every decision he makes.
    • Amanda and Ian vs. The World: Ian’s friends and those from his world all disapprove of his relationship with Amanda. Ultimately, they have to fight for their right to be together, despite ancient laws and traditions bent on destroying their bond.

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c.b.w. 2013

A Chat With Marie Marshall

Lupa is easily one of the best books I’ve read this year, (see Book Review: Lupa), so I am thrilled to present an interview with the author of this extraordinary novel, Marie Marshall. Not many writers can successfully fuse two distinctive time periods into a seamless storyline, but Marshall pulls it off with both intelligence and finesse. My sincere thanks to Marie for agreeing to take the time to answer my questions with so much thought and detail.

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1) What inspired you to write Lupa? In particular, what are the origins of your interest in the Bosnian War and Ancient Rome?

It’s a long time ago since I actually wrote Lupa – I finished it in 2004 – so it is difficult to remember. I recall that the suggestion that I write about a female gladiator came from a fellow-writer, Lucy P Naylor. Lucy often tells me I’m a better writer than she is, but in fact, if anything, her short stories enjoy more success than mine because of her quirky sense of humour. However, she sometimes gives me ideas for stories that she doesn’t think she’s equal to, if you see what I mean – stories that she thinks need my particular toolkit of literary skills to tackle. Sometimes it’s the suggestion of a plot, sometimes it’s a general idea. In the case of Lupa it was a general idea – to write about a female gladiator. In the end, the book wasn’t ‘about’ a female gladiator, but rather a female gladiator was the vehicle that carried one half of the book. I didn’t want the novel to be simply a ‘sword and sandal’ adventure, I wanted it to be more psychological, I wanted it to explore the idea that people see only what they want to see. 

I have no particular interest in the Bosnian War, nor in Ancient Rome; but the Bosnian War gave one of the central women a reason to be in an environment where she was always going to be, to some degree, an alien, an outsider, someone whose presence, if only in a legal sense, is dubious. Therefore it’s not strange that things happen to her that she can’t quite grasp, things happen that she totally misinterprets.

2) Your novel revolves around the idea of a strong female spirit. Why is this such an important theme to you as a writer?

The strong female spirit. It’s still something which despite the history of women writers from Aphra Behn to Alice Munro, does not feature as prominently in fiction as it might. I don’t see it as a matter of women taking on stereotypically male roles, like Xena on TV. You might think that my female gladiator gets close to that stereotype, but I don’t see her that way, she is a mixture of vulnerability and strength, but they are individual vulnerability and strength as well as, or parallel too, what makes her a strong woman. I think it’s the same for both of the women in the novel. I don’t stop the men in the stories being ‘actors’, taking control of the plot as and when necessary, and I don’t stop the women having the odd delusion about what is actually going on. Now I come to look back on it, I was aware that the story – the stories, rather – drove the book along, drove the way the women acted and felt, but at the same time I tried to write ‘from the inside out’; I immersed myself in the emotions of the story, allowed myself to feel what was happening to the two women. I could drill down deeper into this question, but I would have to start giving plot ‘spoilers’, and I’d much rather people read the book!

3) What was your inspiration for creating the charismatic personality that is Vittorio?

Vittorio needed to be charismatic in order to help build up the misconceptions that Jelena had about him. Again I don’t want to give too much of the plot away. I don’t think this was a matter of inspiration so much as a plot necessity. Also, as a gay woman, it was a bit of a challenge for me to write about a man with that level of charisma and attraction.

4) What is the ultimate message you hope to send to the readers of Lupa?

I didn’t write the novel with a message in mind, I wrote it to be readable. However, I think if a book does not have some kind of message, does not tell us something about human nature, then it is rather thin gruel. The ending – again without giving too much away – is a hopeful one, one which opens up possibilities, at least for my twentieth-century woman, and that hope comes not just because of the final plot twists, but it grows out of what is a little philosophical discussion between the two main twentieth-century characters. What’s going to happen next? Who knows – anything is possible. I guess I want people to enjoy the book, but more, I want them to put it down at the end and have questions to ask about themselves and about human nature.

5) You are also a poet. Where can readers find some of your published work?

I guess Amazon is as good a place to look as any for my first collection of poems, Naked in the Sea, which was published in 2010. My second collection, I am not a fish, is due out before Easter 2013, and again Amazon would be a good place to start. The rest of my work is scattered throughout magazines and anthologies, and there are daily jottings on my blog, I guess. If you happen to be passing through New Orleans and visit the New Orleans Museum of Art, you’ll find one of my poems etched onto an African drum. Not many Scottish poets can claim that!

6) If you were a female gladiator, what name would you take and why?

What name would I take as a gladiator? I put a lot of my own personality into the character of ‘Lupa’, so to an extent I already have a gladiatorial name. I think if I really was a gladiator I wouldn’t care what name I was known by, except perhaps the name known secretly only to Nemesis!

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I found Marie Marshall while wandering through the blogsophere. She posts poetry and prose guaranteed to challenge your imagination and intellect. Be sure to stop by her blog to see her daily adventures in literary creation.

kvennarad.wordpress.com

Her novel, Lupa is available on amazon.com along with her poetry book, Naked in the Sea.

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c.b.w. 2013

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