This is the final installment in a series of vignettes inspired by travelers of the London Underground.
Somewhere Else
His round glasses slip down his nose and he pushes them back into place with one finger. He turns the page in his battered copy of The Three Musketeers and plunges further into a world filled with more interesting characters than himself.
There’s a hole in the sleeve of his brown tweed jacket and his hair is thin on the crown of his head. He can’t recall the last time he was noticed or regarded as anything more than a man who sits alone. Athos, Aramis, and Porthos keep him company, but cannot save him.
His silence screams, but goes unheard.
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Me
I try to blend in, but I’m never sure if they know my home is much further than the train goes. My touristy map is safely hidden in my purse and I page through the London Evening Standard with the same interest as everyone else. As long as I don’t speak with my foreign accent, maybe they’ll assume I’m part of the club. The woman next to me shifts in her seat. She glances at my sneakers and notices my hoodie.
My story is anyone’s guess.
c.b. 2011
The photo looks like it was taken in the Sixties. The architecture and the way the people are dressed . . . something. That was great how you did yourself. Magnificent ending.
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I never looked at the picture from that perspective, but I can definitely see it! I took this shot over the summer because its the station I went in and out of every day. 🙂
I’m glad you liked the ending . . . I fought with my muse over it for a while. 🙂
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i always try desperately to blend in with the locals when i travel as well. lovely read 🙂 i can’t wait to put time aside to read all your recent entries! (i haven’t been on in a few weeks!)
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Thanks! 🙂
Welcome back! I hope you enjoy catching up . . . I’ve been a busy little writer!
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Bounds Green tube station is a little Art Deco gem, by the way.
M
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It truly is! I discovered most of the surrounding area of Muswell Hill is full of Art Deco treasures. 🙂
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From your personal vignette, the details of sneakers and hoodie, I guess that you are young, but not too young because you are reading a newspaper. The woman next to you may be a writer gathering details to write a vignette about this woman on the subway, Underground.
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I love it! 🙂
(You’ve got me pegged!)
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Love the second one! It’s been fun reading these.
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Thanks! 🙂 It’s been fun writing them! There’s a few people I’m looking to extend into longer stories. They are just too interesting to leave alone!
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Great read. Does this have to be the end?
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I’m so sad to end it! Alas, all good things must come to an end.
Thanks so much for reading! 🙂
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Strangers always fascinate me – and I love just observing people and listening to conversation. I’m also digging the ending to the one about yourself! What do you think the man was screaming about, though? It sounds to me like a plea for affection – he seemed lonely.
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I’m glad you liked the end! I debated about whether to do it, but it seems to be working quite well. 🙂
Hmmmm . . . . ponder this: How much of the silent man is real and how much is fiction. 😉
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This has been my favorite series of yours so far. I could picture every character as written except for Somewhere Else. For some reason, this is the only one where the description doesn’t fit my mental image, nit sure why though. 🙂
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He was an interesting fellow and very English (and I mean that in the best possible way). I had the hardest time figuring him out and I guess that shows in the writing. He almost seemed like a man trapped in the past.
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Not to pick nits, but in the previous, the nit was not. 🙂
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Got it! 🙂
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And the woman in sneakers and a hoodie, reading a newspaper….I wonder how and where her life leads her, if this story were continued…….
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A little piece of that story shows up on this blog every time I post. I often wonder myself where my sneakers will land next. 🙂
Thanks so much for reading!
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LOVE that last line “My story is anyone’s guess.” that is so true for all of us! Your writing is divine my dear!
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Thanks! 🙂 My muse definitely knew what she was doing when she whispered it in my ear.
I sent this series into a short story competition – hopefully they like it as much as you!
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