An open gate
calls your name
Wrapped in solitude
listen, be free
Green sings
in myriad hues
The breeze invites
a soft embrace
– – –
c.b. 2012
An open gate
calls your name
Wrapped in solitude
listen, be free
Green sings
in myriad hues
The breeze invites
a soft embrace
– – –
c.b. 2012
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Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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Great picture, C.B.! Would make a great book cover.
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Thanks! I have a thing for benches and gates when I take pictures and this one got the best of both. 🙂
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Mmm,” the breeze invites/a soft embrace” Love that last part.
Jim
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Thanks! 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed it. There really was a lovely breeze that day.
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this is a lovely setting….a place I will never see up close and personal.
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You never know, maybe one day you will. 🙂
It was a beautiful place and it was sheer luck that I ended up on that park bench.
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Lovely poem, lovely setting…
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Thank you! 🙂
After a busy morning, I’m already wishing I was there to soak up the peace and quiet.
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I can feel your moment! Lovely photo!!
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Thank you! 🙂
It was a wonderful moment and I think of it often.
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I think this is my favorite of all your poems. It really touched me.
Thank you.
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Oh, wow. 🙂 Your comment is why I write. Thank you for reminding me.
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Wish my front yard is as serene-looking as this.
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Me, too! 🙂
Thanks so much for reading!
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What a lovely place to do absolutely nothing.
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It was definitely a nice place to clear my head . . . and do nothing for once in my life. 😉
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Looks like a great place to set up my laptop and feel the breeze in my hair – and maybe jot down a poetic word or two. Or better yet, sit with a friend and listen to birdsong. 🙂
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The last line sounds like the perfect thing for that bench. 🙂
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I can imagine myself on that bench surrounded by all the singing hues of English garden greens.
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Whenever I’m having a stressful day, I think of this place and it always soothes my nerves. It was so quiet and beautiful! 🙂
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Ooh, I loved all of this (poem and picture!). Lovely =)
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Thank you! 🙂 This picture was on my desktop for a long time. Its a nice reminder to sit down and breathe when the day gets overwhelming.
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