Almost like two recombined shorter poems, lovely rhythm to it. An interesting picture as well, old statues are always a bit sad. Maybe its the faces worn by time?
The statue is part of pair in Hyde Park. I’ve always been fascinated by them and I make sure I visit them every time I go to London. One of these days I’ll get around to researching their history. 🙂
The lines hit me out of nowhere the other night. It was weird, but I love it when a poem flies out like its always been there. 🙂
My favorite line is “Take the past/give me now” which seems so fitting for this beautiful figure, trapped in old marble for so very long. I envision her wanting to be set free. A beautiful pairing, once again.
At first glance, I thought the lady in the statue had her leg out, and she was holding onto her toes. 🙂 Once I realized what it actually was, I quite enjoyed it and your wonderful poem. (I still see the leg though if I just glance at it). 🙂
Almost like two recombined shorter poems, lovely rhythm to it. An interesting picture as well, old statues are always a bit sad. Maybe its the faces worn by time?
Jim
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The statue is part of pair in Hyde Park. I’ve always been fascinated by them and I make sure I visit them every time I go to London. One of these days I’ll get around to researching their history. 🙂
The lines hit me out of nowhere the other night. It was weird, but I love it when a poem flies out like its always been there. 🙂
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OK, cool poem AND photograph. May we all be sung free…
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Thanks! 🙂
(That’s my favorite line, too.)
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That was my favorite line, too! 🙂
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Interesting with the photo and the word “PasT”
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🙂 I love making pictures and words play together.
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“Sing me Free” – I love that!
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🙂 That seems to be the favorite line overall. It’s strange how the best lines come out of nowhere.
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My favorite line is “Take the past/give me now” which seems so fitting for this beautiful figure, trapped in old marble for so very long. I envision her wanting to be set free. A beautiful pairing, once again.
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Thanks! 🙂
That last line was inspired by something happened to me a few days before I posted. I’ll be writing about it later on next week. 😉
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At first glance, I thought the lady in the statue had her leg out, and she was holding onto her toes. 🙂 Once I realized what it actually was, I quite enjoyed it and your wonderful poem. (I still see the leg though if I just glance at it). 🙂
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Lol! I can totally see how she might be viewed that way! 🙂
Glad you enjoyed the lines – the inspiration behind them is multi-faceted, both here at home and abroad.
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This is wonderful!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Gave me chills! Very nice!
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Thanks! 🙂 It was a fun little piece to write.
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Thanks!
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🙂
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