a message from him
let’s meet at eight
can’t wait
sitting alone
half past nine
a full moon
a message
I never sent
where were you
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Image: Automat – Edward Hopper, 1927, WikiArt.org
Words: (threaded) senryu, c.b.w. 2016
Part of the 2016 April Poem A Day Challenge (via Poetic Asides on Writer’s Digest) for the April 2 prompt: he said/she said
I love the way you’ve threaded these together to tell a story. 🙂
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I LOVE threading haiku and senyru together. The idea that they can stand alone or tell a larger story is so appealing. 🙂
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Loving this series.
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😀
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