I. cool
the elm tree shades
patches of grass
sipping lemonade
II. uncool
left sitting alone
headlights pass by
stood up
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Image: Picnic Under the Trees – Julius LeBlanc Stewart, WikiArt.org
Words: haiku, senryu, c.b.w. 2016
Part of the 2016 April Poem A Day Challenge (via Poetic Asides on Writer’s Digest) for the April 19 prompt: cool/uncool
Sipping lemonade . . . sounds so nice.
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That does sound nice!
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Love the play of light in the first.
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Thanks – I love how trees create shadow art! 🙂
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I somehow see evil lurking in the picture and expected something about that in the uncool … Hmm. Terrible mind.
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Klimt is a provocative artist – I like how his work invites contemplation and sets the imagination on fire. 🙂
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