It’s official, my sinuses hate me. The yo-yo weather of late is turning my head into a ticking time bomb and I swear it’s ready to blow. To preserve my sanity, I’ll be keeping this update rather short.
Word Count Progress:
Draft #1 Word Count:
- Start Word Count: 60,366
- End Word Count: 63,373
- Total: 3,007
Draft #2 Revised Word Count:
- Start Word Count: 62,703
- End Word Count: 65,883
- Total: 3,180
Writing Process Notes:
- It’s been four days since I’ve worked on Novel #2, but I’ve decided no work is better than trying to revise while under the influence of Benadryl. No good can come from the drowsy stupor I find myself in whenever I take those little pink pills.
- My goal for this week is to reach 90% completion. That way I can use Spring Break to complete the final 10%. I don’t like how close to the deadline this is all happening, but at this point I don’t have much choice but to plow through.
Novel Tidbit:
Epilogue or not?
- I’ve been playing with the idea of an epilogue since I finished Novel #2. As a matter of fact, I’ve already written the epilogue as a segue into the sequel. The only thing I can’t decide is whether the segment should stay an epilogue or become the first chapter of the next book.
- The epilogue basically focuses on the morning after the closing action sequence. Everything appears calm and Amanda can finally relax after what can only be described as a traumatizing experience. However, just as everything starts to feel normal, her new reality reminds her that nothing can ever be as it was before. Too much has changed and too many dangers remain.
- So, readers, what is your opinion concerning epilogues? Love them or hate them, share your thoughts in the comments.
– – –
c.b.w. 2013
I like epilogues personally. Sometimes when a story just ends after the big action happens I feel a little let down and annoyed. I think “Then what?”. A short epilogue that shows the main character going back about their life, or a little teaser of what is to come makes me feel better. So I say do it!
Good call on not working while on Benadryl. If I was on it I think I would only write scenes about big fluffy beds, naps on the beach and sitting in the park.
LikeLike
I’m busy picking apart books that have epilogues I like to see what they share in common. Hopefully a pattern will emerge! π
LikeLike
Epilogues: love them and hate them–it really depends on how they are written. As a reader I find that too often they feel like the author’s attempt to simply tie up loose ends. I like the idea of writing the first chapter of the sequel to be included at the end as a teaser to get the reader hooked on the next book.
LikeLike
I’m not a fan of epilogue that “fix” everything. I like it when they open another door. π
LikeLike
Hope you feel better soon. I usually like epilogues but it really depends on how the book ends.
LikeLike
Thanks. I’ll be happy just to be able to breathe at this point! π
Some epilogues work and some don’t. I suppose the trick is figuring out what makes a good one tick!
LikeLike
I would agree with some of the other comments – epilogues that just create ‘happy ever afters’ can be quite sickly, but the way you describe yours does sound like a bit of a teaser for the next book. Therefore, as someone suggested, perhaps it could be the first chapter, previewed in the previous novel? Sort of an Epilogue for the original novel, but a prologue for the sequel to remind people how things ended previously?
Good luck with your sinuses, hope you feel better soon. Take Care, Cat x
LikeLike
Thanks for the well wishes! π
I’m definitely not doing a happily ever after epilogue (I hate those, too!). What I’ve written definitely creates a teaser for the next novel, but I don’t know that its enough as a stand alone chapter. I may have to think a bit more . . .
LikeLike
Can’t you have the Epilogue also serve as the Prelude to the sequel. Besides, you may find, once book #3 is written that you have more to say on the matter anyway. In which case, you might repeat and elaborate upon it.
LikeLike
That’s what I’m thinking – I wrote the epilogue as something like a bridge between this book and the next. I drop a big plot bomb, but I don’t give too much away at the same time. π
LikeLike
Congrats on the good, despite-Benadryl progress, BTW!
LikeLike
Thanks – I’m hoping to get back into things tonight. I don’t like spending so much time away from the story!
LikeLike
I like the idea of a teaser to the next book. Sometimes epilogues wrap-things-up but my energy for the book has already moved on…..unless it’s a cliff hanger and I can wait for the next book. Ask why you want one or need one? Of course, an editor will set you right….
LikeLike
That’s true. The inspiration for what I’ve written was a surprise so I just rolled with it until I ended up with something kind of interesting. Perhaps my beta reader will give me some insight, too. π
LikeLike
You’re making great progress! I do like epilogues although I haven’t read many books that have them.
LikeLike
I’ve noticed epilogues show up quite a bit in YA fantasy books that are part of a series. Sometimes they are beautifully crafted and other times, they’re not. I supposed that’s where my ambivalence falls – I’ve never written one until now, so I’m wondering if its good or bad!
LikeLike
I like epilogues typically, especially if they really leave me hanging.
LikeLike
I do, too! I want to be left desperate for the next book! π
LikeLike
For me, the best epilogue is the head-snapper…where there is one last magic trick to be offered; one that the reader never saw coming. In a paragraph or two, done well, you can change everything about everything? -Lynn
LikeLike
I agree! The epilogues I have enjoyed in the past always drop a little plot bomb that makes me gasp! π
LikeLike
I agree with the comment by lynnbiederstadt…they are great as a final way to say to the reader “you thought everything was wrapped up and that you figured it all out, but here’s a little surprise to keep you thinking about what you think just happened.” And if it’s a teaser for the next novel, so much the better.
Benedryl completely takes over my brain, too. No point wasting your energy on conscious thought, ’cause you can’t have any conscious thoughts on the stuff. Hope you feel better soon.
LikeLike
Feeling a little better today, but still looking forward to a Benadryl nap! π
I think I’ve written an epilogue that has a few surprises, but I guess I’ll have to wait and see what my beta reader thinks!
LikeLike
I gotta say, Benadryl sleep is pretty darn sweet! Enjoy the nap!
LikeLike
depends…but usually no for if it is an open ending, why not roll with it? then again, I love books that finally ‘hit me’ a few days later ~ a
LikeLike
I read over what I wrote for the epilogue last night and it does seem flow really well and it leaves a great open ending. π At the moment, I’m leaning towards keeping it in place.
LikeLike
Hope you’re feeling better! It’s the worst when the weather can’t make up its mind.
From the description of your epilogue, I would vote yes. It sounds like a great teaser for its sequel, and I love that intentional hook that draws me into the next book before I even open its cover.
LikeLike
Feeling so much better! Thanks, π
Thanks for the vote. As I get closer to having to make the final decision, encouragement like this really helps!
LikeLike